She was not in the habit of kissing strange boys. And this boy was strange, no doubt about it. He danced like the crazy homeless man she had seen on the streets of Nashville. But on him it was cute, sexy even.
She touched her fingers to his hair, soft and blonde and hanging over his shirt collar like yellow silk. Fine, thin hair that he would lose someday in the not so distant future. She always could predict those kinds of things. Strange though he was, when he moved his lips to hers she accepted and returned the kiss.
Today's post is my entry into this week's 100 Word Challenge, hosted by Velvet Verbosity.
The prompt was "fingers".
The prompt was "fingers".
Terrific job.
ReplyDeleteYour 100 words is better than the entire script of Riding in Cars With Boys starring Drew Barrymore.
ReplyDeleteas brutally masculine as my 100 words is, that how feminine yours is....well done.
Lance
A sweet declaration of love... nicely done.
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ReplyDeleteOoooooo I like this a LOT! It feels so authentic. And realistic.
ReplyDeleteA magical moment for sure! Wonderfully written.
ReplyDeleteI was able to really see and feel this. Nice.
ReplyDeleteI really liked the line "she always could predict those kinds of things." nice.
ReplyDeleteGreat first line...and good for her that by the end of the scene she was open to new possibilities! :)
ReplyDeleteA sweet moment in time in this relationship. well done :)
ReplyDeleteThe lines about the future of his hair spoke of a real attraction to the person, and not just the sexy strangeness he presented. Very nice.
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