Today's post is my entry into this week's 100 Word Challenge, hosted by Velvet Verbosity. The 100 Word Challenge is an exercise in which we write exactly 100 words in response to the weekly prompt word. Click the link to read the other entries–good stuff over there!
This week's prompt was "gratuitous".
What he doesn't know is that he no longer means anything to me. His syrupy, sticky-sweet charm, full of gratuitous compliments, no longer pulls me into his orbit. Now, I see it for what it is. Simply a drama, a one-act play, a one-note song which only grows more tedious once you've heard it over and over.
Now I see him for what he is. The man walks away, leaves his children, and never looks back. He spends his life in pursuit of a grandiose dream that will never come to fruition. A sad, pitiful man.
every girl's dream kiss-off speech, isn't it?
ReplyDeletegood job
oh - I know that guy - he comes in several different shapes, doesn't he? Well done, Ms. Marsha! (And - agreeing with Lance, about the kiss-off speech!)
ReplyDeleteI know that guy as well! Great piece!!!
ReplyDeleteThanks. Reading it again, I think I messed up my verb tenses in the second paragraph. Hope I will be forgiven.
ReplyDeleteCake, honestly? It wasn't written as a kiss off speech, but if it works then good.
Ugh, people like that drain my energy.
ReplyDelete"Simply a drama, a one-act play, a one-note song which only grows more tedious once you've heard it over and over."
You said it perfectly. Couldn't have described it better. Well done.
Well written...unfortunately about something happens in real life!
ReplyDeleteSomething THAT happens in real life. (Sheesh! Sorry.)
ReplyDeleteExcellent declaration of independence. Very powerful.
ReplyDeleteI like Tara's comment better than my comment. Forget what I said.
ReplyDeleteExcellent entry, Tin.
Too bad more people can't see this in their relationships. Perhaps there would be less of an issue if there were more awareness? Great submission, thank you.
ReplyDeleteI think we wrote about the same guy this week. :P
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