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Saturday, March 12

Revealed

Today's post is my entry into this week's 100 Word Challenge, hosted by Velvet Verbosity. The 100 Word Challenge is an exercise in which we write exactly 100 words in response to the weekly prompt word. Click the link to read the other entries–good stuff over there!

This week's prompt was "ample".


She stood before him exposed, allowing him to see what would normally be skillfully camouflaged. A lifetime of being ashamed of her ample body caused her to tremble and bow her head, aware of his scrutinizing gaze. But the look on his face was worshipful as his glance swept her from head to toe.


“You're so sexy,” he whispered.


As he reached out a hand to caress her face, pushing a strand of hair from her cheek, she realized she could trust him. She raised her eyes to meet his, a soft smile touched her lips. What was that feeling?




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6 comments:

  1. so glad you're back writing

    The line about trust was very effective. Easily identifiable to both sexes.

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  2. LOVE!

    Well written and captures it so well. Thanks.

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  3. This was wonderful! You conveyed so many emotions beautifully.

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  4. Thanks, y'all! And thanks, Cake. I am trying to prioritize my life a bit better so that I can fit everything.

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  5. I love this piece---its so sweet and beautiful!

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  6. This is lovely. Gave me chills.

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